This is very well done, Maggie. I liked the switch in the point of view from the world of humans to the world of dolphins. Your descriptions are graphic and that makes them quite real. In addition you did it all in the form of a very short story.
Pulitzer Prize!
Wow Maggie... you almost made me cry... but in a good way! its really sad, but i liked how you veiwed it from all the sides. i can't think of anything that should ever be changed...keep up the great work!!
This is very well done, Maggie. I liked the switch in the point of view from the world of humans to the world of dolphins. Your descriptions are graphic and that makes them quite real. In addition...
